My New Instrumental Demo

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https://soundcloud.com/gimmem0re/unknown-instrumental

This is the first demo so, that's why it sounds like it's missing something, well, the point of this thread is... should i finish this? delete something from it? maybe the bass synth? add another instrument?

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